Thursday, May 17, 2012

Stars in a moonless sky

Stars in a moonless sky

What is it that you dream about she asks.
Your Smile,Your look
Your Kiss,Your hug
Your love,Your trust
Your words,Your feelings
Your warmth,Your concern
Your presence,Your eyes
He replies.
And she smiles as she understands the language of truth.


She mulls over his words
Long after he has slept
She lies awake
Weaving with them
Her security blanket
Wrapping them around herself
And then carefully squirreling them away
On the days when there is nothing but blackness
For his words are the stars that illuminate her moonless sky.
And they are hers.
Nothing can take them away from each other now.

For words once uttered find their way into hearts
And later spill over to paper
In form of poetry.
Immortalised forever.

Perhaps this is what they call love.

© 2012 Preeti Shenoy
 

For more poems click here. Some poems have already appeared in print. Kindly do not reproduce without permission.
__________________________________________________________________________

If you like my blog, you might enjoy my books :) Grab them here. (You don't need a credit card. You can pay cash on delivery) or if you are an Amazon Fan, you can grab them here
 And you can interact with me on my FB page. I always reply :)





38 comments:

  1. Its a lovely poem :)
    A visit to your blog is always delightful =D

    ReplyDelete
  2. @aishwarya: Thank you!! You're so kind!

    @shachi: Thanks!!

    ReplyDelete
  3. Beautifully penned...!!!!!

    ReplyDelete
  4. Beautifully put!

    ReplyDelete
  5. Beautiful and fabulicious! :)
    Some posts will implicitly force one to comment, this one falls into that category!

    ReplyDelete
  6. That was a straight from heart poetry, Preeti!! Loved the way you wrote:)

    ReplyDelete
  7. Lovely poem, straight from the heart in simple words! :)

    ReplyDelete
  8. Really nice:) Read this one a few times and fell in love with this one!

    ReplyDelete
  9. Sounds like its out of an M&B book.

    ReplyDelete
  10. Absolutely loved the second para..
    Especially these lines

    "She mulls over his words
    Long after he has slept
    She lies awake
    Weaving with them
    Her security blanket" :)

    ReplyDelete
  11. Beautiful piece of writing! I liked the second paragraph especially :)

    ReplyDelete
  12. Simple and Beautiful !
    Touched my heart :)

    ReplyDelete
  13. Beautiful peom preeti...

    ReplyDelete
  14. Aha. Mr S is an incurable romantic :):)

    ReplyDelete
  15. Indeed a great one... read your book ' Life is what you make it' . simple easy to read and yet it is very effective. i just finished it in 2 days...

    ReplyDelete
  16. Awesome preeti...loved it

    ReplyDelete
  17. Simple words, yet so effective!! Loved it!
    -Durga

    ReplyDelete
  18. That is what a reader needs! No magical words but the blend of love and simplicity impacts a lot more!

    ReplyDelete
  19. A perfect poem for me...datz all wat i can say....superbly put n great ending!!!:-))

    ReplyDelete
  20. really entering the heart.good imagination.

    ReplyDelete
  21. Lovely, "again"!! :) :)
    I've bookmarked your blog and FB page, so that I never miss out on any update/post of yours!! :)

    Dhriti.

    ReplyDelete
  22. Beautiful lines, wonderful expression and one meaning LOVE - superb post!

    ReplyDelete
  23. lovely lovely!!! straight from the heart!!!
    Loved it!!

    ReplyDelete
  24. what a lovely poem. beautifully expressed

    ReplyDelete
  25. Lovely poem !!! expressed a great fact in simple words..nice one :-)

    ReplyDelete
  26. Beautifully written!

    ReplyDelete
  27. Good bikes shops in london
    Excellent Working Dear Friend Nice Information Share all over the world.God Bless You.
    used bicycles london

    ReplyDelete
  28. loved the 2nd para.. too good :)

    ReplyDelete
  29. Nice work....next you should come out with a book on poetry

    ReplyDelete
  30. Nice poem!! Romantic..:)

    ReplyDelete
  31. Thanks all!!! :)

    It was from the heart! :)

    ReplyDelete
  32. Nice one...
    http://www.deccansojourn.com

    ReplyDelete

Thanks for stopping by. I really appreciate your leaving a comment! Okay--I appreciate your leaving a comment if you have something nice to say ;-)